Get a detailed manuscript report on your first 3 chapters — delivered in 24 hours, written for self-publishing romance authors.
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This report is for you if any of these feel true:
You're not sure if your POV is consistent or if readers will even notice.
You've rewritten the opening hook three times and still aren't confident.
You want to self-publish on Amazon KDP but don't want to launch a rough draft.
You're not sure if the romantic tension lands — or if it just lands flat.
Your report covers every element that makes or breaks a romance novel opener:
Head-hopping, deep POV issues, and perspective clarity.
Where the story drags, where it rushes, and how to fix both.
Does the spark land? Is the chemistry believable from page one?
Are your leads distinct, compelling, and worth following?
Does each chapter end in a way that demands the next one be read?
Specific scenes flagged with actionable rewrites suggested.
Does your opening meet the expectations of your romance subgenre?
A candid summary of what's working and what to prioritize next.
No back-and-forth. No waiting around. Just feedback, fast.
Click the button below, pay $15 on Ko-fi, and paste your first 3 chapters into the submission form. Include your subgenre and a short synopsis.
Your chapters are read and analyzed against romance editorial standards. Every section of the report is written specifically for your pages.
Within 24 hours, you'll receive a detailed editorial report by email — ready to act on immediately.
Professional-quality feedback at a price that makes sense for emerging authors.
For your first 3 chapters · One-time payment
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Here's what early clients shared after receiving their reports:
"I had no idea my POV was slipping that much in chapter two. The notes were specific, kind, and immediately actionable. Worth every penny."— Mara T., Contemporary Romance
"This gave me more useful feedback than a year of asking my writing group. I knew exactly what to fix before uploading to KDP."— Joelle R., Paranormal Romance
"The romantic tension section alone changed how I write. My first chapter hook is completely different now — in the best way."— Cassie D., Small-Town Romance
Your opening three chapters, up to approximately 10,000 words total. If your chapters run long, just include the first 10,000 words and note where you stopped.
All of them — contemporary, paranormal, dark romance, small-town, historical, fantasy romance, romantic suspense, and more. Include your subgenre in the submission form so your report is genre-aware.
Yes — this report is specifically designed for new self-publishing authors. The feedback is honest but constructive. You'll leave knowing exactly what to improve, not just that something is wrong.
By email, within 24 hours of your submission. Make sure to include your email address in the form — that's where your report will land.
Absolutely. Your chapters are used only for the purpose of generating your report and are never shared or stored beyond that.
Start with chapters 1–3 — these are the ones that determine whether a reader keeps going (and whether KDP buyers convert). Additional chapter reviews may be available in future.
Submit your first 3 chapters today and have a full editorial report in your inbox by tomorrow.
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